SE HER. Og responder meg.

Har du noe grafikk du vil vise frem? Eller kanskje en hjemmeside? Noe du vil ha respons på? Vis det fram her!

Re: I just wanna show you guys something

Innlegg sesica » 12 Sep 2010 01:36

- “Please, Maria,” he said unhappy. “After all, you are my mom. And if you’re happy with this guy..” Caine looked at Edilio, who raised his hands like to protect himself. “.. it's okay for me.” Maria smiled trough her tears. “.. As long I don't have to live with you,” Caine completed his sentence. His face was still turned to Edilio, but it showed no feelings.

- “Okay. I'll be happy if you stay here untill Edilio and I leave.” Maria knew that was all she could ask from Caine. The feeling of Edilio’s warm hand at her shoulder was comfertable. They were going to take their honeymoon on another, smaller island, and Maria couldn’t wait. Edilio owned more gallions that she had ever done, ande he was happy to share. He allready had big plans around Maria’s white stone house.

Nå har jeg den nesten ferdig, så jeg kommer til å legge den ut litt hyppigere fra nå, men jeg vil fremdeles gjerne ha respons. Kommentarer til hendelsene, pirking på skrivefeil, ros, ris osv. Værsåsnill?
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Re: I just wanna show you guys something

Innlegg Ivory Yovaile » 12 Sep 2010 01:41

Det var fint skrevet. :3
bro you look so cute right now. dude you are so fucking adorable
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Re: I just wanna show you guys something

Innlegg Esmeralda Asimka » 12 Sep 2010 08:33

sesica skrev:

....This was not like he [b]was
used to.
....it was just him and his mum, Maria(?)
...."buy a new outfit."

Jeg orker bare å ta den første teksten ^-^'

- Du skriver ganske fint, men noe du må jobbe med er gramatikken din (:
- Den første regner jeg med at bare gikk litt fort i svingene, sånn at det ble "var" i stedet for "was"
- Når du skal sette opp to personer og forklare den siste, skriv gjerne forklaringen på hvem det er før du skriver navnet. Sånn som du satte det opp, så leste jeg at det var "him, Maria and his mom"
- Pass på a og an. An orange, men a Train.

;)

Ellers er du veldig flink til å skrive
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Re: I just wanna show you guys something

Innlegg Leah Kiowa Laurence » 12 Sep 2010 11:23

Du er flink. Jeg hadde lest alt det der fra før av, faktisk.
Du må legge ut bilder, Sina. Fordi jeg bestemte det.
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Re: I just wanna show you guys something

Innlegg sesica » 12 Sep 2010 11:44

....This was not like he was used to. - Hahaha, he var used to, faktisk. xD Takk.
....it was just him and his mum, Maria(?) - Du har rett, veldig rett. Maria er mora hans, ja. :3
...."buy a new outfit." - Kremt, takk. :3

Jeg orker bare å ta den første teksten ^-^'

- Du skriver ganske fint, men noe du må jobbe med er gramatikken din (:
- Den første regner jeg med at bare gikk litt fort i svingene, sånn at det ble "var" i stedet for "was"
- Når du skal sette opp to personer og forklare den siste, skriv gjerne forklaringen på hvem det er før du skriver navnet. Sånn som du satte det opp, så leste jeg at det var "him, Maria and his mom"
- Pass på a og an. An orange, men a Train.


Taaaaaaaaakk. <3 Var/was-feilen var jo bare teit. Takk for det andre også, jeg liker respons. :3
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Re: I just wanna show you guys something

Innlegg sesica » 12 Sep 2010 12:01

Bilde

Avataren til Seth. Tegnet den for hånd, i sommerferien. Jeg vet at den ikke er noe spesielt bra, men jeg er faktisk ganske fornøyd, siden jeg tegner lite. Og shit i at jeg skrev ravnkloing med K istedet for Ravenclaw. xD
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Re: I just wanna show you guys something

Innlegg Leah Kiowa Laurence » 13 Sep 2010 17:03

The blond ravenclaw with the missing brain. Gode minner<3
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Re: I just wanna show you guys something

Innlegg sesica » 22 Okt 2010 17:04

BLOGGEN MIN

Også noe jeg skrev.

I hate the dark.
It feels like it has taken me away from you
and dumped me in the midle of nowhere,
- just to make me scared.
It worked, I am scared.
I should know that you are there beside me,
but I am not sure. How can I be?
I can’t hear your breath because of the music and it’s driving me crazy.

I want to feel your warmth,
I want to her your breath,
I want to hug you
and I want to know you’re there.

The black air has locked me up in myself,
and I just need someone near me.
Someone.
I am to depentent on people
and I need my friends all the time.



Jah, nå skal jeg forsøke å få liv i responstråden igjen. Hjelp meg. Skal legge ut bilder, snart.
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Re: I just wanna show you guys something

Innlegg Daniella V. Frances » 22 Okt 2010 17:07

Likerrr bloggen din. C:
BAZINGA
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Re: SE HER. Og responder meg.

Innlegg sesica » 02 Aug 2011 23:50

LES. Takktakk. :3

'Say something about me that I think everyone should know?' The brown-haired boy in front of me looked a bit confused. I just nodded. 'Oh, okay. I'm seventeen. Er, I like drawing. And writing. I also read a lot. And I'm bisexual. You knew that, of course,' he said and found the pencil he'd been keeping behind the ear. I passed him a paper and he immediately started drawing with a grin. 'New people are one of the things that inspire me the most.' Maximillian was handsome with his tall body and dark hair, I knew that, but was his personality as nice as I'd imagine? Looked like that. 'I feel the same way. Unfortunately, I'm not a visual artist,' I said and made my date laugh. 'Like I'm an artist. You're more artist that me. People have heard about you. You're vocalist and songwriter in one of England's best bands, for Gods sake,' he said. Oh, his Irish accent was so cute when he got exited. I laughed with him and shook my head. 'Damn it, you listen to our music. But thanks. I didn't know that you liked our music that much,' I said and watched him carefully. 'Are you mad? Of course I do. Your lyrics is great. And I love your voice, Patrick.' I couldn't help blushing. He made it sound like my band was really famous. It wasn't. We just played some music, mostly in our spare time, and had a few fans. 'You're sweet. Thanks. You made me happy by telling me that,' I said and grinned.

My sandwich was soon finished and Maximillian was done with his lunch. 'What do you want to do?' he asked. 'I would love to hear you talk about your music. Your band mates, are they nice?' I nodded, with a big piece of sandwich between my teeth. 'Of course they are. They're my best friends,' I said after swallowing my food. 'Can I see your drawing?' I asked and sweared to myself because of my unnecessary shyness. 'Ah. Yes, of course,' Maximillian said and turned the paper around so I could see. I was stunned. He had drawn a detailed bird in just some minutes and the drawing was beautiful. The whole drawing was made with a normal pencil. 'Wow. It's ...great,' I said, too amazed by his skills to say anything smarter. 'Thank you,' he said and blushed. Cute, so damn cute. 'Want to come with me home?' I asked. 'And I'm not a pervert. Just to know each other better.' He laughed. 'Didn't thought you ment it that way at all. You live on your own?' Maximillian asked. 'Not really. I live with one of my band mates. But he's away for the weekend. And he would have freaked out if he saw me with a boy who isn't him,' I said and raised up from the chair.
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